Short story; Isolated.

Killingspree

Yes, in this story. It will notthave perfect grammar. What I need you to look for is the storys main line, and what it means.

I was walking to school, in a good mood. I was calm, as I walked to school. The leaves rustled. I also heard a dog barking. As I came to the school, I had noticed something..."Diffrent". The llights were off. It was covered in darkeness. Not a single speck of life to be seen. I was rather confused. Had I come early? I sawmy best friend Julie walking out, was awalys jealous of her. She had the pefect family, a brother, and everything she wanted. I thought she would happily come up and say,"How is it going". She did not, she blanky stared into my eyes, and whispered something to herslef. I thought, "something is wrong here somthing is teribly wrong." I wanted to examine the school, but as I stared. Everything had frozen, isolated. It was like I was alone on my own planet.(Later would I find out, I am in for more then I can handle alone) I thought baack fear and entered the vacant school. The walls were black, everything was black. I thought I heard someone watching me from a distance. I began to sprint, scared and fighting back tears. I had run into the school gym. I heard a soft whisper, james... james... I wonder, Why was this thing calling me. And out of nowhere, came out a strange looking figure I couldn't figgure out what the figure was, and it disappeared, And appeared behind my back. As for myself, I was standing there scared, confused, and shocked. The figure grabbed me, and after that I just saw a blur. Later then I woke up startled, I qiuckly got up and exaimened the room. And I was about to...
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You all gave me nothing!
Give me cash I'll put you in my sig!
Thanks to marvel man! He gave me 400 X cash. Is you Reward me you get put into my sig! Man this is a competion, beetween marvel man. And falco who will win!

Falco2008

YES FINISH IT DUDE OR ILL HAVE TO BAN YOU Lol

(didnt know you wrote stuff)
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t3h cuffs

so, your name is james, huh? well... huh....now you finally spoke of it. *on topic* I think you should finish this... im sort of looking for SOME kind of suspense...
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Killingspree

That is not my name, LOLZ.
Part two.
I was startled as I got up off my feet, What was here. Starnge a room white all white, I saw on the walls pictures, of my family, my friends, everyone I knew and loved. Suddenly I was the figure, He took off his mask. I was shocked, he had no nose, no ears, no eyes. Just a blank white face. I heard what seemed to be his voice. James, you must enter the duel of the elites, or everyone on this wall, will be dead. Others will be playing, also seeking to save their loved ones. I wish you luck, it starts in 8 days. Prepare yourslef for on hell of a game. 8 Days later, (The figure teleported me into some hotel) I was ready for everything, the figure got up, and declared,"Let the battle of elites begin!" The first challenge is rtdsa! I had a stange look on my face,"rtdsa?" The rules of this challenge will be, The person to first get through the whole track, will get to pick one family member to save, all others will pick one to kill. "I looked at the track and thought oh my gosh! I won't survive this, I saw a acid pool some strange huge bat, snakes, and a spike wall." Come on James you can do this I said to myself. As the figure yelled START! I ran across the track, I saw the weapons I could use for the challenge, On the wall were a shotgun, body armor, and a gas mask. I put on the mask first, as I went into the first room, which was Extremly light. I could hardly see, then out of nowhere a flying mace just skins my head, I was scared shocked, But I ran as fast as I could forward, as I got out of the room, I saw the acid pool, no rope, no anything how am I souppse to cross this, I thought... Aw HA! a switch. I shot it with my shotgun then the acid pool drained, as I come into the next room, gas shoots everywhere. Bats are flying around me, One bat hits me, as I fall. I get my shotgun and shoot him with my last bullet. I run out the door happily, untill my smile turns into a frown, I came in deadlast. The figure said,"now you have 5 days to pick the person who dies." good luck, the next challnge is a unknown time.
PART 3 COMING SOON. I don't know how many parts there is going to be Verry happy

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Falco gave me 401 x cash. Verry happy

You all gave me nothing!
Give me cash I'll put you in my sig!
Thanks to marvel man! He gave me 400 X cash. Is you Reward me you get put into my sig! Man this is a competion, beetween marvel man. And falco who will win!

Falco2008

AH TEH SUSPENSE!!!!! nice job so far
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Killingspree

Thanks, you will never belive the end...
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Falco gave me 401 x cash. Verry happy

You all gave me nothing!
Give me cash I'll put you in my sig!
Thanks to marvel man! He gave me 400 X cash. Is you Reward me you get put into my sig! Man this is a competion, beetween marvel man. And falco who will win!

Falco2008

Cant wait for it
Off-topic: *gives u 101 loot*
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Shadowcasterx4ffc

Great storyline. Definitely finish.
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Killingspree

I was so filled up with misery as I stood up looking at the pictures It was heart breaking watching all my family members and friends. And to wipe them away
Tears were rolling down my eyes, I couldn't imagine thinking of losing one... what could I do, I couldn't belive this, I wanted to quit the game. Just leave and forget about it. After I rolled back my tears of anger and misery I knew who I was going to pick. As the figure called us, I saw every loser was crying to lose one of their loved ones, one by one. Untill it got to me, I handed him the picture of Julie, I'm going to miss her. the figure annouced,"The next challenge begins now!" Do you see that wall mr.James. I responded,"Yes." Well from that wall you can save one member and he or she can join and help you with the game. You may unleash him/her to help with any challenge, then the person will be taken away untill you ethier run out of people to save or kill or you quit and kill them all. The things you need to pass this test is a pair of gloves and a jacket. Okay",I said. Begin! I rushed up the wall, as fast as I could. Made the stupidest mistake of my life. I forgot the gloves, I ran up the icey trail anyway. Slipping and swishing, I fely the water leak into my shoes, then I felt a chill. THIS IS NORMAL ICE! My feet! Were frozen! I had to think fast, what could I use.I banged my feet against the wall, As the ice broke off. Yes! I have to stay away from that ice. I started climbing on the sides to avoid the icey terror, my fingers were numbing. Spiders, they were on the floor, they weren't black ones. They were light blue. I began to climb faster up. Cold from the ice, and spiders climbing to drag me down. I thought my death was ensured. Untill I saw hope, the finish line. I ran, oh no I had to pick fast to be the frist one. I picked a random pictuer and ran. I was the 1st! Yes! I jumped around and laughed of joy. WHile others stared a look of hatred, and depise. I quickly stopped. Then slowy dragged me feet to my hotel, I looked at the picture. It was Andrew, My best friend. I had known him since 2nd grade.He was a perfect match, Only thing I didn't know how to summmon him, I asked the figure. He said,"Through your hearts balence you may unleash your friend" I thought, "what does that mean?" The figure ran off, I had many questions running through my mind. Who to save, how to unleash my friend. How to win the next challenge.Well find out in PART 4!
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Falco gave me 401 x cash. Verry happy

You all gave me nothing!
Give me cash I'll put you in my sig!
Thanks to marvel man! He gave me 400 X cash. Is you Reward me you get put into my sig! Man this is a competion, beetween marvel man. And falco who will win!

Shadowcasterx4ffc

Interesting. Keep it up.
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Killingspree

Thanks everyone. Icon_:angl2)

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Falco gave me 401 x cash. Verry happy

You all gave me nothing!
Give me cash I'll put you in my sig!
Thanks to marvel man! He gave me 400 X cash. Is you Reward me you get put into my sig! Man this is a competion, beetween marvel man. And falco who will win!

Falco2008

Awesome cant wait for part 4
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TGIF

Haha this is actually really good! Keep going man you're great at this
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I had chosen well which person to save, I had to think it over well, then I came to a cunclusion. I had chosen my dad to stay. I always liked him more then Mom. My mom wasn't really the person you could call nice. She never said,"hello or good bye to me."And when ever she had free time she spent it going out with friends. I was at the the picking, as once more I saw the eyes staring at me with hatred as if it was my fault a member of their family is going to die. The figure shouted the next challenge will be a team 2v2 tourny. A 2v2 you mean like in what? "In life."The figure exclaimed. What?! I can't kill a person! If you don't then you forfit. dang it. The fugure teleported Anderw, startled he said,"whats going on?" I said I can't tell you know, later for nwo we need to kill all the players on the other team, if you value your life. The figure gave a us a shotgun a glock a p-90 and a sniper rifle. he shouted GO! I ran behind a wall and peeked out side. Holding my sniper rifle ready to snipe, I saw one, the red blob the won the first game. The out of nowhere a bullet, I dodged just in time, it only cut off a eye lash. Whew, I quickly shot him. I missed, anderw then shotgun him, then strange a direct shot. Then out of noere the bullet comes out of his body! It's coming straight to me, I dodged aagain."How can we kill that!" Anderw said,"Try to hit him in th face, there is no goo there." I ran away from the wall, silenty. While andrew kept him busy. I say his friend, not a blob rather it was a giant slug. I crept behind it. And shot his neck. I assume the red blob heard. He face turned red of anger. He was now facing me, WHOA he speed atleast tripled, I found him behind me in a flash, I dodged a puch. Then he kicked me down on the floor. I was bleeding but no time to worry about that now. Andrew took the p-90 and shot him every where. He was dead, untill he regenarated! This guy is unstoppable, we need to try to get him to control his anger anderw said. But how? I have a idea.I swung a fist at him, as he grabbed me. Anderw climbed on his back and shoved the p-90 into his eye. I then sniped his other eye out. Whew I think he is dead. yeah, strange I looked at my leg, Oh my god I think it gave me a viruis. My legs were black, the figure came. And said,"Now since you won the challenge." I see that the figure gave you a choper ell, he shoved his hand into my leg, As I screamed because of the searing pain, he took out a ell. Very small, If I hadn't noticed it would have eaten your leg to the point were it falls off. Now I would put something on that wound before you die of blood loss. Okay. Oh and your friend is free to stay. with yuou that is the reward for all surviors. As I walked out it seems like we weren't the only ones having a tough time. People were hurt, bleeding, and without limbs. Me and anderw walked back to the hotel. Well I guess I have alot of explaining anderw...
Happy

Part 5 coming soon.
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Falco gave me 401 x cash. Verry happy

You all gave me nothing!
Give me cash I'll put you in my sig!
Thanks to marvel man! He gave me 400 X cash. Is you Reward me you get put into my sig! Man this is a competion, beetween marvel man. And falco who will win!

Falco2008

OoOoOoO exciting!!!!!!!!!
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Killingspree

Thanks.

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Falco gave me 401 x cash. Verry happy

You all gave me nothing!
Give me cash I'll put you in my sig!
Thanks to marvel man! He gave me 400 X cash. Is you Reward me you get put into my sig! Man this is a competion, beetween marvel man. And falco who will win!

Shadowcasterx4ffc

Keep it going.
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